Who is the first person to write the composition with full marks in the college entrance examination
4hw.org: every year, the topic of composition in the college entrance examination will cause a lot of hot discussion. Every year, there will be many full score compositions in the college entrance examination, but do you know who is the first person to write full score compositions in the college entrance examination? The article he wrote surprised the professor, and it was also the first time for him to create a full score composition!
Jiang Xinjie, who wrote "the death of the red rabbit" in ancient vernacular in 2001, is probably the first person to write a full score composition. With this composition, he was admitted by Nanjing Normal University. He once said in an interview that when he wrote this article, the invigilator teacher stood by and looked at it for a long time.
In 2001, the composition was based on a story provided to the examinee to evaluate 'honesty'. Jiang Xinjie, the examinee's composition title was the death of the red rabbit. Based on the familiar Three Kingdoms story, the author compiled a touching story about the death of the red rabbit and the horse for honesty, highlighting the theme of 'honesty must be told by the true heroes', and expressing his ambition to choose the good and follow the good and only look forward to honesty in life The theme of the article is intended to be a higher level. What's more valuable is that the author uses the well-known ancient vernacular, which is clear, clear and elegant. The old language skills make many examinees unable to catch up with each other, and also make the teacher of the examination paper admire it, and give full marks.
The death of the red rabbit
In the 26th year of Jian'an, 221 A.D., Guan Yu was captured and refused to surrender when he was defeated by the army, which was harmed by Sun Quan. His mount red rabbit horse gave Ma Zhong to Sun Quan.
One day, Ma Zhong put on a watch: the red rabbit and horse fasted for several days and will soon die. Sun Quan was shocked and rushed to visit Bo Xi, a famous scholar in Jiangdong. After bole, he was said to be proficient in horse language.
Ma Zhong led Bo Xi back to his house and to the trough, but when he saw the red rabbit and the horse lying on the ground, he could not help crying. Everyone did not understand, but Bo liked to know. Bo Xi dismissed all the people, stroked their backs and sighed: 'in the past, Cao Cao wrote "though the tortoise is long lived" & lsquo; an old man with great ambition is a man with great ambition. In the old age of the martyr, I am very ambitious. I know that you want to follow the kindness of general Guan. However, when LV Fengxian died in baimen tower that day, he didn't see that you were so dependent on each other. Why didn't you live such a light life today
The red rabbit and the horse hissed and sighed: 'tell me, the birds will die, and their voices will be sad; the people will die, and their words will be good. &I'm glad to meet you, sir. I can tell you what I have said from the bottom of my heart. I was born in Xiliang and was captured by Dong Zhuo. He was domineering and domineering. He killed Shaodi and slept in the Dragon bed. He was actually a thief of Han Dynasty. I hated him deeply. '
Bo Xi nodded and said: 'later I heard that Li Ru offered a plan to give the king to Lv Bu, who is the bravest general in the world. All people said that Lv Bu is one of the people and the red rabbit is one of the horses. &If you want to be a king, you will not lose your ambition. 'the red rabbit and the horse sighed and said:' the words are bad. Lu Bu was the most unbelievable man. He killed Ding Yuan for glory, stabbed Dong Zhuo for beauty, cast Liu Bei for Xuzhou, and married Yuan Shu and beheaded his emissary. &Lsquo; no one can believe and never establish & rsquo;. It's a great shame for me to be known as such dishonest people! Later, I belong to Cao Cao. Although his men are as powerful as clouds, no one can be called a hero. I'm afraid that I will only humiliate the hands of the slaves and die between the troughs. After that, Cao Cao gave me to general Guan. I saw his martial courage in front of the tiger prison and his kindness in the white gate tower. I have been admiring him for a long time. General Guan was very pleased to see me and thanked Cao Cao. Why do you think so? General Guan replied, & lsquo; I know that this horse has traveled thousands of miles every day. Fortunately, if I know the whereabouts of my brother in the future, I can see him in a day. &This is true of his integrity. As the saying goes, & lsquo; birds fly with phoenixes and phoenixes, and people accompany virtuous people with high quality. &"Do you dare not report death?" he said with a sigh. "People say that general Guan is a man of integrity. What we hear today is true. '
The red rabbit and the horse sobbed and said: 'I have a taste of the high righteousness of Boyi and Shuqi. Jade can be broken but not white, bamboo can be broken but not section. A man dies for his confidant, a man lives for his integrity, and I am willing to eat Wu Su and live in the world. Bo Xi burst into tears and said, 'things are still like this, how can people be embarrassed?' and then played to Sun Quan. Quan also wept: "I don't know how honest Yun Chang is. Now this loyal and righteous man has been harmed by me. How can I see all the people in the world?" later Sun Quan sent an order to bury Guan Yu's father and son with red rabbits and horses.
Brief comment: after reading this on-the-spot composition, it's amazing to take a case. First, the story is novel. Based on his familiarity with the stories of the Three Kingdoms, the author has compiled a touching story about the death of the red rabbit and the horse for the sake of honesty, which is full of imagination. The second is to be ambitious. In the dialogue with Bo Xi, the red rabbit horse is personified to show its praise and criticism to Guan Yu, Dong Zhuo and Lv Bu, and to realize the theme of "true heroes must be honest"; in addition, the combination of "birds fly with Phoenix, people accompany virtuous and good quality" and "things are still like this, how can people be worthy of it" expresses the aspiration of choosing the right and following the right, and being honest and farsighted, which makes the idea of the article higher level Lou. Third, the language is old. The whole article is written in ancient vernacular, which is well-known, well-organized, clear and elegant. This sophisticated language skill is beyond the reach of many examinees.
In 2010, the group leader of Jiangsu college entrance examination composition review praised it as "absolutely amazing", and the classical literature experts were also "stunned"
'the first feeling to see this strange article is, I'm surprised! It's absolutely unique among middle school students!' Mr. Wu Xinjiang is an expert in classical philology. Although he is responsible for the examination of basic Chinese knowledge, when the composition examination team finds this strange article, he can only ask him to help. 'not only do ordinary examination teachers not know or understand it, but also I, a teacher who teaches classical literature I don't know all of them. I've seen some of them but I haven't used them. I don't know any of them at all. After I went back, I looked up the materials, made notes, and wrote a full 4 pages of notes! However, it's nothing to be able to write ancient words in classical Chinese alone. After all, this is the composition of the college entrance examination, and the most important thing is to get to the point. 'the most valuable thing is that this examinee is different from the "death of the red rabbit" and the composition of the college entrance examination written in oracle bone inscriptions. His composition is very relevant to the topic. It is very commendable that he uses his special language and special characters to freely express such a theme!' and Wu Xinjiang also highly praised the examinee's style of writing, 'No Tang and song prose style, but the ancient classical Chinese, has Fu body characteristics, also has parallel prose characteristics, is very good at description, the literary style is just right, the characteristics are clumsy, solid, heavy, in my impression, this style and Han Dynasty Yang Xiong and modern Zhang Taiyan, Lu Xun are relatively close, as a middle school student, very outstanding. Moreover, his ancient characters, allusions and use are very smooth and natural, which shows that this cultural accomplishment has been internalized into his own things. Wu Xinjiang is teaching practical classical Chinese writing in the liberal arts base class of Nanjing Normal University this semester, but I haven't met such a student yet. I think he has surpassed me in this respect. 'said Wu modestly.
And Professor He Yongkang, the leader of the composition examination group, also highly praised the 'ancient prose Wizard', "it's absolutely amazing!" Professor He said, "this article is very rare because it's full of water and water. I think his accomplishment in this field is quite high, not ordinary excellent. At his current level, he can be admitted by colleges and universities. If the enrollment policy allows, he can even study for postgraduate directly. '
What kind of examinee is this? Everyone is full of curiosity. 'I guess he must be very fond of reading and have read a lot of books. He is familiar with Yang Xiong, Zhang Taiyan and Lu Xun's articles. Secondly, he must be very smart. As a composition in the college entrance examination, he can write such a level. He can't do it by playing smart. In a word, it's not easy! "Said Wu Xinjiang.