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That black afternoon, 400 words after reading

I believe you, like me, are a little bookworm. Of course, the books you love to read are like countless stars in the sky. My favorite book is that black afternoon.

As soon as you listen to the topic, the students will be confused: 'how can it be black in the afternoon?' You must be familiar with the 5.12 earthquake. In the memory of the hero Laughing Cat, 5. The afternoon of the 12th earthquake was black.

The five members of Xiaomao family live in Wanglong villa. Before the earthquake, Xiaomao's family was in the school of Ma Tianbao, Ma Xiaotiao's good friend. Suddenly, the green hill opposite the playground was split from the middle, revealing ferocious stones; The teaching building in the school was torn open and precast slabs made of steel and cement fell one by one. The Laughing Cat realized the earthquake, so it tried its best to hold his wife and children. However, in the face of natural disasters, no matter what humans, animals and plants do, they are in vain. The laughing cat family was scattered. In order to find his wife and children, Xiaomao embarked on this difficult road to find his wife. Along the way, there were many real stories that moved Laughing Cat very much. When I read that 'mother did not hesitate to use her weak body to block the ferocious rocks in order to protect her children', I burst into tears.

Yes, in front of nature, all creatures are small and vulnerable. However, in the face of natural disasters, some people are good and others are evil. Good people will trade their lives for others' lives, and evil people will escape all this, regardless of other people's life and death. The practice of good people is undoubtedly worthy of affirmation.

Students, please read this book. I believe that you will be inspired and enlightened after reading this book! After reading "that black afternoon" of "Laughing Cat Diary"_ 450 words. I wrote the feeling after reading that black afternoon from the diary of laughing cat. The book records 5 & middot from the perspective of a cat; 12 Wenchuan earthquake.

It tells the story of a laughing cat and his children lost in the earthquake, so it embarked on the road to find his wife and children, and encountered one touching story after another in the earthquake. For example: the mother used her body to protect her child, but she was smashed to death. Later, people saw a mobile phone message: baby, if you are still alive, please always remember: I love you! Laughing Cat experienced many life and death along the way, but finally found its children -- fat head, Erya, Sanbao and his wife -- tiger skin cat.

I think this book is well written and can't be put down. Because this book taught me not to give up any hope. If you give up, your life will fail. Of course, it's also because Yang Hongying wrote well!

How many times have I given up hope in my life! Take the recent skating for example. Although I didn't skate well, my friends encouraged me to believe in myself and don't give up hope. But I fell once and gave up, saying I wasn't skating material. It's too late to think about it now! However, after I calmed down and read the book, I realized the importance of hope. Even a cat didn't give up hope to find his family. Why can I wait to give up hope? So, I skated again. Despite the pain in my legs, although I fell countless times, and although I still didn't master the skating skills, I firmly believe that I can't give up hope. I should try to live up to my mother's expectations and give my mother a perfect answer!

I can't forget the joys and sorrows brought to me by this book, but also remember the truth it gives me. Reflections on the golden fishhook_ 400 word society Teacher Wang asked me to help her find the text of the golden fishhook and the materials about the text. When I got home and finished my homework, I began to check the materials on the Internet. Unexpectedly, the text about the golden fishhook on the Internet

There are a lot of relevant materials. I saved several. When I was browsing other materials of this text, I saw a video material about this text and saved it.

I first read the text. Just at the beginning, I was attracted by the moving content of the text. I seemed to be on the scene. The tall body and kind smile of the old monitor came to mind.

With the development of the text content, I smiled and frowned. When I read the text 'he sat there holding an enamel bowl, chewing a few grass roots and the rest of the fish bones we ate', I was so surprised that I opened my eyes and was strongly shocked. I read this sentence several times again and again, and I became more and more involved, The more he opened, the more he was moved by the words and deeds of the old monitor. When I finished reading this text completely, my eyes were wet unknowingly. I think the old monitor left us not only a small fishhook, but a high-quality product for self sacrifice. Welcome to wechat: www 4hw for more knowledge. virtue!

My heart is deeply moved. I really want the old monitor to survive and let him enjoy our happy and beautiful life today!

We should learn from the old monitor, his lofty spirit of self sacrifice and his loyalty to communism. We must study hard, make progress every day, and become a useful talent for the country when we grow up!

Let the 'golden fishhook' pass down from generation to generation and shine forever in today's reform and opening up of the motherland! One dream wonderful life under the five rings_ 400 words keep forging ahead and working hard

--One dream -- wonderful life under the five rings

After reading the book "one dream -- wonderful life under the five rings", I couldn't help feeling surging.

Liu Xiang, a name known to all Chinese people! He is the man who broke the world record in the 110 meter hurdles. But who knows what happened to Liu Xiang when he was a child? I don't think many people know? I didn't know before, but after reading this book, I was shocked: it turned out that Liu Xiang had gone through some twists and turns on the road of track and field! In 1996, he was favored by a coach named Sun Haiping and sent to a sports school for training. But at first, it didn't seem so smooth. Xiao Liu Xiang was always injured. Mother couldn't help it, so she let Xiao Liu Xiang leave the sports school. The young star almost died. Finally, his father let him return to the sports school. Seeing here, I can't help but breathe a sigh of relief. It was dad who saved the world champion! Since then, Liu Xiang has made continuous efforts. After setting a new world record in the 110 meter hurdles, he is still working hard. Because, like everyone, he is looking forward to the 2008 Olympic Games. Ah! Should we learn from him this spirit?

Deng Yaping, this name is also a household name. She is only 1.55 meters tall, but she is the 'Big Mac' in the table tennis world. Do you know why? It is because of her constant efforts that she has created her success!

Whether it's Liu Xiang or Deng Yaping. They wrote a wonderful life under the five rings. This is the harvest of their continuous progress and efforts!

Huang Yunyi, class 3, grade 5, Tonghe, Baoshan District, was interested in reading that black afternoon_ 350 word "that black afternoon" is one of the books in the series of "Laughing Cat Diary" written by teacher Yang Hongying. This book describes the moving events that Laughing Cat and its children saw and heard in the Sichuan earthquake. It not only wrote the feelings of the laughing cat family, but also the feelings between people, and even the feelings between people and animals. 'no matter where you are, I must find you! Life and death are inseparable! " These words are the thoughts of laughing cat when it is separated from its relatives. This paragraph appeared many times in the book, so it impressed me deeply, but the impression was not only seen many times, but also because behind this paragraph was the love of smiling cat for his wife, tiger skin cat and three children. What a great family affection! Not only these family ties, but also in other events, I can feel the feeling that blood is thicker than water after the disaster! When I was reading this book, I was moved in several places, and sometimes I cried. Through this book, I thoroughly realized the strong family affection of life and death between animals, and also knew that people and animals can live in harmony. After reading this book, I know a lot of truth, but there is one truth that is most worthy of our understanding: in this world, no matter what love is, it is selfless and great! Summer essay: after reading that black afternoon_ 800 character "that black afternoon" is one of the series of "Laughing Cat Diary" written by Yang Hongying. I like it very much. It's also very good-looking.

This book describes a sudden earthquake that struck Cherry Valley at the foot of Wanglong mountain on a dark night afternoon. Suddenly the mountain fell apart. Cherry ditch, water, immature cherry red and purple, all disappeared in an instant. In this earthquake, Xiaomao and his wife and children were separated, so in the pale sun, Xiaomao embarked on a difficult way to find hellip& hellip;

What moved me most was that after Xiaomao found Erya, he met a weak ewe and gave birth to a lamb. Xiaomao broke the umbilical cord for the lamb. At this time, the ewe died, but the Lamb 'Baa Baa' shouted. What should we do? Fortunately, dexterous Erya found a dead baby's mother dog. The laughing cat came up and asked, 'Mom dog, I have a lamb here. Can you feed him?' The mother dog immediately said, 'OK, I have milk. I'll feed the lamb.' When feeding, a kind smile reappeared on the dog's mother's face. After reading this paragraph, I cried.

In the face of natural disasters, all creatures seem so small. We should protect and respect nature. Keep all natural disasters away from us.

Yantai Nantong Road Primary School Grade III e composition network summer essay scoring standard scoring standard division score 1

Subject content (30 points): 6 points for each item, and 3 points will be deducted for non conformance. 1. Whether the subject is clear and has ideological value and practical significance; (6 points) 4.52. Whether the material selection can express the theme, rich and vivid; (6 points) 53. Whether the content and theme are unified; (6 points) 54. Whether the title of the article is appropriate, eye-catching, concise and novel; (6 points) 55. Whether the feelings are sincere. (6 points) 5 II

Genre structure (20 points): the full score of each item is 4 points, and 2 points will be deducted if it does not meet the requirements. 1. Whether the style can be determined; (4 points) 42. Whether the clue context is clear; (4 points) 3.53. Whether there is text eye; (4 points) 34. Whether the levels (chapters and paragraphs) are clear and reasonable; (4 points) 3.55. Overall, whether the layout structure of the article is rigorous, natural, complete and symmetrical. (4 points) 3

If the language expression (20 points) is not in conformity, 3 points will be deducted for each item. 1. Whether the language is smooth and logical; (7 points) 62. Whether the writing skills are properly used; (7 points) 5.53. Whether the details are appropriate; (6 points) 4.5 IV

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