Spring is coming quietly.
Where is spring? Spring is on the field. Xiao Cao's brother changes into a new green suit. Taohua's sister shows a pink smile. Sister Liu Shu is looking in the mirror by the lake! Diary winter vacation diary 0s net.Cn
Where is spring? Spring is in the sky. The geese came back in line. Lovely birds sing happily, hardworking bees gather honey in the flowers, and beautiful butterflies dance among the flowers. The crisp singing and wonderful dancing add a lot of interest to spring.
Where is spring? Spring is in the river. Tadpole, fish and duck are swimming in the competition! You see, none of them is willing to show weakness. How interesting they are!
Where is spring? Spring is on our campus. The sound of reading in the classroom and our happy figure on the playground.
Spring! You are by our side. You make the world alive.
Teacher's comments: one question one answer, catchy.
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Spring girl came quietly. Do you know where she is?
Spring girl is on the earth. Xiao Cao's brother changed into a fresh green suit. Some of them nodded their heads, some of them bent down to show their vitality in the soft spring breeze. Hua'er's younger sister doesn't show weakness. She puts on bright clothes, pink, white, red and purple & hellip; & hellip; colorful. Sister yingchunhua blows the golden trumpet as if to say: 'spring is coming, spring is coming! '
Spring girl is in the sky. The beautiful big butterflies are dancing. That wonderful dance is intoxicating. The industrious bee is busy gathering honey. They were attracted by the fragrant flowers and would not leave for a long time. The geese also came back from the south. They line up in a 'human' shape and a 'one' shape, excitedly announcing the coming of spring.
Spring girl is in the pond. The duckling stretched out and swam happily in the water, saying to the fish that spring is coming. The little fish jumped around in the water and told the little tadpole that spring was coming. Tadpoles play hide and seek in the water, some hide in the stone, some hide in the water. They had a good time!
Spring girl is still in our campus. The children took off their thick cotton padded jacket and played on the playground. In the classroom, students read loudly.
In fact, spring girl is in our heart!
Teacher's comments: the structure of the article is clear, the narration is smooth, and it can be used to learn. It is worth learning by the same age students to use the rhetoric techniques of personification and metaphor properly.